Okay! I dealt with the font a little better this time, making it a little less blah and more form-fitting. It definitely looks nicer but I really need more practice with fonts and kerning and such.
Just so everyone knows why I chose not to include the other band members in my composition I have included that version here for all to see. It looks very awkward but I suppose as far as the assignment goes, this one is actually more appropriate.
Looking at it now though, I'm sure a horizontal composition and again, better font, would have helped immensely. But anyway! Colorful poser is colorful.